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raisedbymoogles ([personal profile] raisedbymoogles) wrote 2013-12-05 10:09 pm (UTC)

First Sentence

I have, Megatron realized just before hitting the ground, gravely miscalculated.

Last Sentence

"Optimus..." Rhinox's hand curled weakly around his friend's. "Thank you... you never gave up on me."

What made me want to write it

Honestly? I was in the mood for hotness that day, and Evil Rhinox is pretty much the hottest thing in creation.

Biggest problem I had while writing it

The plot wasn't anywhere near as easy to write as the porn. I still think the whole thing is held together with duct tape and prayer, but I couldn't suffer through another rewrite.

Why it almost never got posted

Originally I was writing it just for me, so for a while I didn't think it was post-worthy.

Scene that hit the cutting room floor

There was a scene where Rhinox successfully shakes Optimus's control and goes after Rattrap, but it was a bit more rapey than I was willing to deal with.

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