Oh, what the hell. Give me something to do at work tomorrow.

[raisedbymoogles]

Give me the title of a story I've never written and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.

Comments

[caiusmajor]

Taming the Savage Rhinox

...DAMN, Rhinox is hot when he's evil. Megatron just wishes he could handle that...but Primal can. And that's even hotter. :D

[raisedbymoogles]

First Sentence

I have, Megatron realized just before hitting the ground, gravely miscalculated.

Last Sentence

"Optimus..." Rhinox's hand curled weakly around his friend's. "Thank you... you never gave up on me."

What made me want to write it

Honestly? I was in the mood for hotness that day, and Evil Rhinox is pretty much the hottest thing in creation.

Biggest problem I had while writing it

The plot wasn't anywhere near as easy to write as the porn. I still think the whole thing is held together with duct tape and prayer, but I couldn't suffer through another rewrite.

Why it almost never got posted

Originally I was writing it just for me, so for a while I didn't think it was post-worthy.

Scene that hit the cutting room floor

There was a scene where Rhinox successfully shakes Optimus's control and goes after Rattrap, but it was a bit more rapey than I was willing to deal with.

[fluffymormegil]

My favourite thing about "Rhapsody in Orange" was the way the alternate character interpretation made a few nagging characterization problems in canon suddenly go away.

[fluffymormegil]

... sorry. Was that annoyingly vague? :(

[raisedbymoogles]

Not annoying, just - I have no idea what to do with that, sorry. ^_^;;;