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the problem i keep running into with the locked tomb series is the same problem i keep running into when writing scenes with more than three people tops in them: too. many. goddamn. people. too many factions, too many angles, too many viewpoints to keep track of. i keep running across tumbls of people talking about all the Deep Lore contained in the character of Keyboardsmash the Whateverth and i'm just like 'whomst?'

don't get me wrong i want the next book in the series. i just think i'd be having less trouble with Gideon the Fourth.